Maza14's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mermaid Hair]

meh...

first thing i noticed as soon as i saw this is that the proportion is completely off. either you drew the head too big or the body too small depending on which you did first. dont get me wrong, it really is a good piece of art. i really like the whole concept of her hair being like water but the mistake in proportion really messes it up cuz its so noticeable so much so that it almost looks like you meant for her head to be that big. aside from that, its really cool.

[Holes , page 74]

HOLES!!!!

mec, j'aime beaucoup ton style; j'ai suivi touts tes arts de Holes et c'est tres interessant mais je ne comprends pas ce qui s'est passe avec l'autre mec avec le masque?? (je m'excuse mon francais)

YannuNG responds:

I'll try to answer in english !
I don't want to spoil the end of the comic book , but I can't give you a clue . There's something really special between the " masked guy " and the world is exploring . Something about evolution and his feelings .

[rabbit]

u know

your work reminds me of the Redwall series. i dont know if u know about them, probably not but thats the first thing that comes to mind when i see your stuff. anyway its really well done

[Amorph]

fuckin hell

man, how fuckin long does it normally take you on these kinds of pictures. the amount of detail fuckin ridiculous. great job, your stuff is always awesome!

[Cockatrice, I HATE YOU]

COCKADOODLEDOO!!!!!!!!!

this is a really cool sketch. it would look better with color tho or at least if you went over it with ink or something. but i understand your reluctance; me and color arent very close friends either! i always refrain from adding color in fear of ruining it but hopefully that will change over time for the both of us!

Hnilmik responds:

I drew this with ballboint pen, so I'm assuming inking with something like a micron pen, huh? Someday I'll know how to color. Someday.

Looking forward to our future color-friendships!

[Embrace of the Virgosis]

what a peculiar way to embrace...

this is really well done and much props for it being completely original. thats not an easy compositon to do especially with the kind of position they are in.

however , there are one or two things that look odd. the left foot of the woman on the left is in an impossible position unless she is a contortionist or something. also, the woman on the rights, rights thigh looks to short and thick compared to her left thigh.

aside from that its sexy.

[Psycho Masquerade]

that would be a badass halloween costume...

very impressive stuff. the amount of detail and the costume design is really good. ahh i need to get off my ass and do some art, so lazy! please do more character designs, the last one you did of that crowman was ridiculously good. this would be even more badass if it were in color but black and white is also good (i hardly do stuff in color myself).

when i see art like this it makes me want to grab my drawing pad and blow off the dust...then i decide to go out for a cigarette instead (my will power is almost nonexistant)

StarwolfTsuname responds:

Thank you very much! Though, this guy isn't my character to begin with, but I did design the outfit, that's all I can take credit for.

I know how you feel though, i've been struggling with Insomnia and my productivity has gone rock bottom for a long time. I can never motivate myself to where I actually finish something until maybe, a year later. :O

You will get the creative bug one day though, and you will not be able to ignore it. But will power is a good practice too.