Maza14's Reviews

[Retarded Animal Babies 23]

meh......

i think some ppl already said it but i'll say it again man, WTF goin on, nothin like the previous eps. it just didnt feel right, it wasnt that classic RAB style we know so well. it just wasnt as interesting or funny as the other ones but i guess an ep like this was bound to happen sometime. i hope you rediscover your form in the next one!

[Hellami Episode 2]

pretty cool stuff

I have to agree with some of what the guys below me said about this. Let me start with the good parts though:

I liked your art style, i think it fits well with the kind of dark, melancholy atmosphere. i like how you draw the characters very realistically, thats something thats really missing on a lot of flash animations I've seen on Newgrounds. its like artists these days are either too lazy or don't have the skill to draw realistic characters so props for that. i liked the sketchiness of it too because i think it also fits with the type of atmosphere that you're trying to portray.

however i don't think the animation does the art style justice. if you're gonna make such a realistic movie, then the animation has to be pretty smooth. the part in the beginning where that guy with glowing eyes was walking towards the girl was kind of messed up. it was like he was just sliding from side to side instead of actually jerking from side to side.

also, the weakest thing about all this was the script and the voice acting. i really don't know which was more poor. the script either sounded out of place, too cheesy or it was forced like when she said that line about not fearing death but being afraid of life. the voice acting was pretty bad, especially for that black guy lol why don't you try actually getting a black guy to do the voice acting? and was the blonde guy supposed to have an English accent?

if you can improve on the script, the voice acting, and the fluidity of the animation this could be much much better.

[Gotham Heat]

great

its clear to see that you put a great deal of effort into this; it was very good and well done. the dialogue was good as well. i just didnt understand why Batman was beating on the SWAT team. they go into the building and he comes out of nowhere whooping ass left and right. perhaps you could have made that more clear.

[Faultline]

very good game

great game. the whole concept, music etc. the only downside about it is that there are no awards.

[Coma]

lush

a really good game, one of the best i played on NGs. just the atmosphere, the music, and the story were all very good. but i must know, is there anywhere to download the music? the acoustic that starts when u get to redwind was really nice.

[Sushi Cat]

well done!

this was a really fun and cute game. the music, the art, the gameplay, everything about it was good.
i only wish that it was longer.

[The Tree of Life]

this is intricate as fuck; a great deal of time and thought must have gone into it.
i very much like pieces like this because it allows us to interpret it in so many different ways because it is so complex.
nice job man

FaLk responds:

thanks man, yeah, thats exactly whats intended, the person interprets each image based on their current frame of mind.

[Guess Who!]

i thought it was a photograph.
great attention to detail however the top right bit doesn't look like it's completed or is it supposed to be like that.
top job!

[Hands]

nice, good shading

so much flesh, its an orgy of hands. i have to do the same for my class but just not in as much detail.

krissalus responds:

Lol that's a pretty good description XD Hands can be a real pain to draw, even when you don't have to go into that much detail. Good luck with yours :)